i'll just give you a 10 and leave now
You take innocence and poison it
That is good. one thing could could have been more clear was the ending. the skull didnt make it clear enough for me and it barely even looked like a skull. if you fix that this could be a 10. other than that. very great story
Yeah I probably should have made the skull a bit more human like. I was getting close to the deadline so I rushed the skull no lie! But thank you for enjoying it nonetheless
thats all i can say. i dont usually like audio with lyrics, but this is inspirationtional
Hahaha im happy to be that exception
I like the beat and simple beat that make it kinda complex. one thing you could work on is keep the beat more organized around the beginning. they seem to be a bit all over the place. if you fix that, the song will be near perfect.
Thanks man. I'll take that into account.
This could have a bit more effort
I feel this is worthy of only a 4 because of it bland emotion. Even for a loop it has no real way to convey a feeling if it has one. You could have put in a few more beat to give it actual life. if you add a few more beats, made a bit longer and cut out any silent areas, this would be worthy of much more than a 4.
Well to be honest, this was made in a few minutes and just for the short video. I wasn't intending to upload it anywhere by itself like this. But sometimes simplicity is beauty. I agree that if I put more effort and time into it, it could become a nice song. Thanks for the review.
the artwork itself is great but her expression is too bland. also, the blood looks a bit fake, if your make here look a bit more intimidated and make the blood more real, this would;d be an awesome piece
Thanks for the comment & for the advices!
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