You take innocence and poison it
That is good. one thing could could have been more clear was the ending. the skull didnt make it clear enough for me and it barely even looked like a skull. if you fix that this could be a 10. other than that. very great story
Yeah I probably should have made the skull a bit more human like. I was getting close to the deadline so I rushed the skull no lie! But thank you for enjoying it nonetheless
And then there was green
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